Page 10 of Deimos Saga chapter 1.
Feel free to critique.
Panel 9 was my favorite. And once again the chairs and tables gave me problems, as well as the morphing Taka. Overall I found this to be a good page even with its flaws.
p.s. There's some dialogue issues along with spelling that'll be the target of a future edit.
Edit: Version 2.0 w/ re-blacked text
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